From the first set, I like the bottle with a grip. It not only will keep the product contained but it'll also be easier to hold. Any of the bottle sprays and gel holders could work. For the logos, The second one from the second set near the top corner looks like it is working well. The last logo from the last set could also work. =)
You should choose all of the structures that have the easy grip. As for the logo... the earth is over-used and the geometric shapes behind the logo is too unnecessary. So. I think that going for a simple typeface with a mark would be best, like your last logo.
Logos- the top two are the most interesting. They catch my attention. Powder- I like the classic with a twist top, it a good idea. Toilet Bowl Cleaner- would like to see something you could grip. maybe the top one with a more ergonomic structure. Sprays- #3 looks evil, I like it. Gel- #3 has an interesting triangular shape and #5 has an ergonomic feel in the curve of it.
For the logos, I think the comet replacing the o with the tail behind the C has potential. Perhaps fade the tail of comet with a gradient so it looks more like an O and its easier to read overall.
I wouldn't go for the twist off cap for the powder style. It seems like most powder products of any kind have the cap integrated into the structure so you don't have to worry about losing caps or spilling a lot of powder if it tips over.
For the sprays and gels, go with the ones that are easy to hold, they're more attractive and functional.
I'm going to be frank and tell you that in my opinion, all the structures and logos still seem a bit generic to me. However, this is a common household brand and I don't know how far customers would want you to deviate.
I like the middle left powder bottle because it's more ergonomic and cleaner/sleeker. I remember you mentioning that you wanted comet to show a more wholesome side like the clorox green. That being said, the top toilet bowl cleaner, top two sprays, and top right of the gels would go with it.
I like the bottom set of logos with the comets but feel like they don't fit the letters too well. Perhaps you could try an enclosing oval treatment with the comet encircling the text, or try the comet design on the t.
From the first set, I like the bottle with a grip. It not only will keep the product contained but it'll also be easier to hold. Any of the bottle sprays and gel holders could work. For the logos, The second one from the second set near the top corner looks like it is working well. The last logo from the last set could also work. =)
ReplyDeleteSarom R.
You should choose all of the structures that have the easy grip. As for the logo... the earth is over-used and the geometric shapes behind the logo is too unnecessary. So. I think that going for a simple typeface with a mark would be best, like your last logo.
ReplyDelete-Christine
yea the easy grip structures are definitely more productive. as for the logos, i like the simplicity of the one with the circle behind it.
ReplyDeleteLogos- the top two are the most interesting. They catch my attention. Powder- I like the classic with a twist top, it a good idea. Toilet Bowl Cleaner- would like to see something you could grip. maybe the top one with a more ergonomic structure. Sprays- #3 looks evil, I like it. Gel- #3 has an interesting triangular shape and #5 has an ergonomic feel in the curve of it.
ReplyDeleteFor the logos, I think the comet replacing the o with the tail behind the C has potential. Perhaps fade the tail of comet with a gradient so it looks more like an O and its easier to read overall.
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't go for the twist off cap for the powder style. It seems like most powder products of any kind have the cap integrated into the structure so you don't have to worry about losing caps or spilling a lot of powder if it tips over.
For the sprays and gels, go with the ones that are easy to hold, they're more attractive and functional.
-Paul
i like the one with the world behind the logo but for some reason it looks familiar to me.
ReplyDeletei would chose first design packaging in for the logo the comet the last one
ReplyDeleteI'm going to be frank and tell you that in my opinion, all the structures and logos still seem a bit generic to me. However, this is a common household brand and I don't know how far customers would want you to deviate.
ReplyDeleteI like the middle left powder bottle because it's more ergonomic and cleaner/sleeker. I remember you mentioning that you wanted comet to show a more wholesome side like the clorox green. That being said, the top toilet bowl cleaner, top two sprays, and top right of the gels would go with it.
I like the bottom set of logos with the comets but feel like they don't fit the letters too well. Perhaps you could try an enclosing oval treatment with the comet encircling the text, or try the comet design on the t.
Can't wait to see round 2 :)